instead of the sorc I would recomnd a DP. your sorc comes out at 185 I believe. you could get a dp, wings, MoT for 150, then choose powers. if you wanted the same setup he'd be 205, but more killy and manouverable. he'd be the same price if you just took warptime, but then he has teh better INV save with the MoT. I just see your sorc wasted a few turns since he's sloggint it and you powers are CC based.
chosen... special weapons!!! get some in that squad!
I'd drop the possessed for the extra points to make the DP and add special weps to the chosen
I'm assuming kharn is going with the beserkers? they would work better 9 men in a rhino with him.
CSM look fine
havoks. dur... one of each different heavy wep? its better to specialize, and since you lack anti tank, I'd go with 4 ML, or 2 Las and 2 ML. rhino is not needed here since havoks willl be sitting back and shooting, riding in a rhino wastes their potential
cheers guys liking the comments and will def take a DP instead. Noted about my heavy boys too, cant wait to try this out. I got a good game vs IG tonight so will look forward to seeing if he comes out with more troops or tanks!!