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    Comedy Short I Wrote!

    Hey guys, just wanted to share a short comedy film I wrote with you!
    It's based on the real Livingston UFO encounter in Scotland, and done in the style of a low budget paranormal documentary/re-enactment show. It's been getting some good feedback so far, so I'm hoping to have a second episode ready to go soon

    Let me know what you think!

    https://youtu.be/dO30yvC3WKU

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    Originally Posted by WaitWhat View Post
    in the style of a low budget paranormal
    Got it except for one thing - green nightvision footage of something scrabbling around in the underbrush.

    It's OK for what you were going for - personally I would prefer sharper cuts and tigther / closer shots.


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    Thanks for watching and for the feedback! It's all being taken on board for episode 2

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    Looking forward to it!

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    Hoping for an early-mid October release for it!
    Thanks again for watching, this early on every view, thumbs up and comment really counts so I very much appreciate it

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    Episode 2 is here, and just in time for Halloween!

    http://youtu.be/p6Xb9u8I0Bg

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    Finally found the time to watch this.

    What I feel is lacking is a punchline, or something overtly funny beyond "haha isn't it goofy that this is like one of those kooky documentaries".

    I was convinced at the end when the host (you?) was about to leave we'll see the ghost standing right behind him, out of sight until he moved. Video needed some kind of exclamation mark.


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    Great stuff!

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    It's been a busy few months, but I managed to get a new episode made! The biggest and best yet, in my opinion 😀
    Hope you guys enjoy, and let me know what you think:
    https://youtu.be/pUVbKBJNZXs

    Next on the to-do list: paint some damn Warhammer! Haha

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    The series seem to resolve around the funny low-budget tone and performances, and it has that, definitely. Still needs some bite in terms of editing and humor I think. The videos' been conventional so far.

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